ICS 139W Spring 2014, Emily Navarro

(adapted with permission from David Kay)

Changing the System: Peer Editing Guidelines for the Intro Tutorial

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Paper Author:

You will edit your assignments in groups of three; you should group with someone who is not familiar with your system, if possible. Take a couple of minutes to identify each other. We will help form groups if necessary.

As you read and comment on each other's papers, keep in mind the purpose and audience of the paper (that is, to introduce their system to people who are new to it).

Each editor will write down his or her comments in the below form. Each author must turn in the editor's written comments along with the revised version of the paper.